Post by ambudaff on Aug 11, 2005 23:15:28 GMT -5
Edisi Bloomsbury (EB) terdiri dari Children Edition dan Adult Edition. Keduanya sama persis, hanya sampul yang berbeda.
Edisi Scholastic (ES) terdiri hanya satu edisi (ada edisi Deluxe tapi isinya sama).
EB terdiri dari 607 halaman. ES terdiri dari lebih dari 800 halaman. Perbedaan ini terjadi karena:
* perbedaan huruf (font)
* ES memuat juga chapter picture, gambar kecil di awal bab, di bawah judul bab, contohnya seperti ini:
Gambar ini dilukis oleh Mary GrandPre
Kemudian ada juga perbedaan karena kebiasaan penggunaan bahasa mereka, seperti ’jumper’ (EB) dan ’sweater’ (ES).
Ada juga yang jeli melihat perbedaan baris-per-baris:
www.sugarquill.net/forum/lofiversion/index.php/t7129.html
HBP Chapter 1
UK First edition, adult hardcover
US First edition, hardcover
All examples are:
(page) UK
(page) US
Chapter 1: The Other Minister
Note: Standard spelling differences are not referenced. Capitalization differences are noted the first time they occur only. Commas and hyphens in different places are not noted unless they change the meaning of the sentence. Other standard differences are listed at the end.
(7)…call from the president of a far-distant country…
(1)…call from the President of a far distant country…
continues throughout the chapter
(7) The bridge was less than ten years old,
(2) The bridge was fewer than ten years old,
(9)…depicted in a small and dirty oil-painting in the far corner of the room.
(3)… depicted in a small, dirty oil painting in the far corner of the room.
(11)…took responsibility for the whole wizarding community…
(5)…took responsibility for the whole Wizarding community…
continues throughout the chapter
(12)…instructed his Private Secretary to take down the portrait of the ugly little man…
(7)…instructed his private secretary to take down the portrait of the ugly little man…
(13)…something that sounded like Hogwarts…
(7)… something that sounded like ”Hogwarts”...
(13) ‘…the Dementors are in uproar – ’
(8) “…the dementors are in uproar – ”
continues throughout the chapter
I didn’t know “whiskey” was spelled ‘whisky’ in the UK!
(14)…he sat nevertheless. Fudge had pulled out his wand…<snip>…and drawn up a chair.
Fudge had talked for over an hour.
(8)…he sat nevertheless. Fudge pulled out his wand…<snip>…and drew up a chair.
Fudge had talked for more than an hour.
(14)…Fudge had appeared out of thin air in the Cabinet Room…
(9)…Fudge had appeared out of thin air in the cabinet room…
(15) ‘A mass breakout?’ the Prime Minister had repeated hoarsely.
‘No need to worry, no need to worry!’ Fudge had shouted,…<snip>
And before the Prime Minister had been able to shout,…
(9) “A mass breakout?” repeated the Prime Minister hoarsely.
“No need to worry, no need to worry!” shouted Fudge,…<snip>
And before the Prime Minister could shout,…
(15) The sight, therefore, of Fudge stepping out of the fire once more…
(10) The site, therefore, of Fudge stepping out of the fire once more…
I think this is actually a typo in the US edition, since “site” doesn’t make sense…
(17) The Office of Misinformation has been working round the clock,
(13) The Office of Misinformation has been working around the clock,
(19) ‘It happened just round the corner from here…’ <snip> ‘…Breakdown of law and order in the Prime Minister’s back yard –’
(The headline is in italics)
(14) “It happened just around the corner from here…” <snip> “…‘breakdown of law and order in the Prime Minister’s back yard’ –”
(The headline is in quotes)
(20) ‘I thought Dementors guard the prisoners in Azkaban?’ he said cautiously.
(14) “I thought dementors guard the prisoners in Azkaban,” he said cautiously.
(21) Fudge looked round at the portrait of the ugly little man…
(15) Fudge looked around at the portrait of the ugly little man…
(23) ‘A team of Healers from St Mungo’s Hospital for Magical Maladies and Injuries is examining him as we speak.’
(18) “A team of Healers from St. Mungo’s Hospital for Magical Maladies and Injuries are examining him as we speak.”
(23)…[Fudge] merely looked as though he had toothache.
(18)…[Fudge] merely looked as though he had a toothache.
Standard differences
UK version uses ‘Minister for Magic,’ and US version uses “Minister of Magic.”
UK version doesn’t hyphenate ‘He Who Must Not Be Named’, and the US version does (“He-Who-Must-Not-Be-Named”)
Lalu ada juga yang jeli melihat bahwa kalimat ini berbeda:
US Edition (pg. 591):
"He cannot kill you if you are already dead. Come over to the right side, Draco, and we can hide you more completely than you can possibly imagine. What is more, I can send members of the Order to your mother tonight to hide her likewise. NOobody would be surprised that you had died in your attempt to kill me -- forgive me, but Lord Voldemort probably expects it. Nor would the Death Eaters be surprised that we had captured and killed your mother -- it is what they would do themselves, after all. Your father is safe at the moment in Azkaban.... When the time comes, we can protect him too. Come over to the right side, Draco... you are not a killer...."
UK Edition (pg 553/554):
"Come over to the right side, Draco, and we can hide you more completely than you can possibly imagine. What is more, I can send members of the Order to your mother tonight to hide her likewise. Your father is safe at the moment in Azkaban... when the time comes we can protect him too... come over to the right side, Draco, you are not a killer..."
Oya, katanya juga bahwa EB selalu menulis mantra, ramuan, dan nama-nama seperti ’Dementor’ dll diawali dengan huruf besar, sementara ES tidak demikian.
Ada yang punya tambahan?
Edisi Scholastic (ES) terdiri hanya satu edisi (ada edisi Deluxe tapi isinya sama).
EB terdiri dari 607 halaman. ES terdiri dari lebih dari 800 halaman. Perbedaan ini terjadi karena:
* perbedaan huruf (font)
* ES memuat juga chapter picture, gambar kecil di awal bab, di bawah judul bab, contohnya seperti ini:
Gambar ini dilukis oleh Mary GrandPre
Kemudian ada juga perbedaan karena kebiasaan penggunaan bahasa mereka, seperti ’jumper’ (EB) dan ’sweater’ (ES).
Ada juga yang jeli melihat perbedaan baris-per-baris:
www.sugarquill.net/forum/lofiversion/index.php/t7129.html
HBP Chapter 1
UK First edition, adult hardcover
US First edition, hardcover
All examples are:
(page) UK
(page) US
Chapter 1: The Other Minister
Note: Standard spelling differences are not referenced. Capitalization differences are noted the first time they occur only. Commas and hyphens in different places are not noted unless they change the meaning of the sentence. Other standard differences are listed at the end.
(7)…call from the president of a far-distant country…
(1)…call from the President of a far distant country…
continues throughout the chapter
(7) The bridge was less than ten years old,
(2) The bridge was fewer than ten years old,
(9)…depicted in a small and dirty oil-painting in the far corner of the room.
(3)… depicted in a small, dirty oil painting in the far corner of the room.
(11)…took responsibility for the whole wizarding community…
(5)…took responsibility for the whole Wizarding community…
continues throughout the chapter
(12)…instructed his Private Secretary to take down the portrait of the ugly little man…
(7)…instructed his private secretary to take down the portrait of the ugly little man…
(13)…something that sounded like Hogwarts…
(7)… something that sounded like ”Hogwarts”...
(13) ‘…the Dementors are in uproar – ’
(8) “…the dementors are in uproar – ”
continues throughout the chapter
I didn’t know “whiskey” was spelled ‘whisky’ in the UK!
(14)…he sat nevertheless. Fudge had pulled out his wand…<snip>…and drawn up a chair.
Fudge had talked for over an hour.
(8)…he sat nevertheless. Fudge pulled out his wand…<snip>…and drew up a chair.
Fudge had talked for more than an hour.
(14)…Fudge had appeared out of thin air in the Cabinet Room…
(9)…Fudge had appeared out of thin air in the cabinet room…
(15) ‘A mass breakout?’ the Prime Minister had repeated hoarsely.
‘No need to worry, no need to worry!’ Fudge had shouted,…<snip>
And before the Prime Minister had been able to shout,…
(9) “A mass breakout?” repeated the Prime Minister hoarsely.
“No need to worry, no need to worry!” shouted Fudge,…<snip>
And before the Prime Minister could shout,…
(15) The sight, therefore, of Fudge stepping out of the fire once more…
(10) The site, therefore, of Fudge stepping out of the fire once more…
I think this is actually a typo in the US edition, since “site” doesn’t make sense…
(17) The Office of Misinformation has been working round the clock,
(13) The Office of Misinformation has been working around the clock,
(19) ‘It happened just round the corner from here…’ <snip> ‘…Breakdown of law and order in the Prime Minister’s back yard –’
(The headline is in italics)
(14) “It happened just around the corner from here…” <snip> “…‘breakdown of law and order in the Prime Minister’s back yard’ –”
(The headline is in quotes)
(20) ‘I thought Dementors guard the prisoners in Azkaban?’ he said cautiously.
(14) “I thought dementors guard the prisoners in Azkaban,” he said cautiously.
(21) Fudge looked round at the portrait of the ugly little man…
(15) Fudge looked around at the portrait of the ugly little man…
(23) ‘A team of Healers from St Mungo’s Hospital for Magical Maladies and Injuries is examining him as we speak.’
(18) “A team of Healers from St. Mungo’s Hospital for Magical Maladies and Injuries are examining him as we speak.”
(23)…[Fudge] merely looked as though he had toothache.
(18)…[Fudge] merely looked as though he had a toothache.
Standard differences
UK version uses ‘Minister for Magic,’ and US version uses “Minister of Magic.”
UK version doesn’t hyphenate ‘He Who Must Not Be Named’, and the US version does (“He-Who-Must-Not-Be-Named”)
Lalu ada juga yang jeli melihat bahwa kalimat ini berbeda:
US Edition (pg. 591):
"He cannot kill you if you are already dead. Come over to the right side, Draco, and we can hide you more completely than you can possibly imagine. What is more, I can send members of the Order to your mother tonight to hide her likewise. NOobody would be surprised that you had died in your attempt to kill me -- forgive me, but Lord Voldemort probably expects it. Nor would the Death Eaters be surprised that we had captured and killed your mother -- it is what they would do themselves, after all. Your father is safe at the moment in Azkaban.... When the time comes, we can protect him too. Come over to the right side, Draco... you are not a killer...."
UK Edition (pg 553/554):
"Come over to the right side, Draco, and we can hide you more completely than you can possibly imagine. What is more, I can send members of the Order to your mother tonight to hide her likewise. Your father is safe at the moment in Azkaban... when the time comes we can protect him too... come over to the right side, Draco, you are not a killer..."
Oya, katanya juga bahwa EB selalu menulis mantra, ramuan, dan nama-nama seperti ’Dementor’ dll diawali dengan huruf besar, sementara ES tidak demikian.
Ada yang punya tambahan?
